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Hi, Great start.  What he needed, he decided, was his partner. He and Lois had to talk this over and see if they could get to the bottom of their colleagues' very strange behavior. At least, he didn't need to worry that Lois would fall all over him. She'd made it very clear for some time that she regarded him as a brother. Quickly, he scanned the office, looking for her, but she didn't seem to be in the newsroom. Ah, there she was, in the elevator. Maybe she was looking for him. Quickly, he swooped into the alley nearest the Planet and made a hurried change to Clark Kent. He'd meet her in the lobby, he decided. Then, they could decide what to do. Can Lois help?  More soon, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Definitely a great start! I can't wait to see what happens. Will Lois be affected by the phermone? Will Clark? <eg> Hurry up and post part 2.  Caroline
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YAY! A rewrite! Of one of my favorite episodes! /me dances around the room and hugs the ficus HAR! All the women throwing themsleves at him. I loved that part. Hmm...Lois...help...disaster cometh. Looking forward to more Jen 
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Woohoo! Great post! I'm loving the beginning of this story! Post more soon please! I love this ep.!
*Blayne*
Clark: You are really high maintenance, you know it?
Lois: But I'm worth it.
Clark: Not exactly what you had in mind, huh?
Lois: Let's see. So far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, been treated as your girlfriend, and insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh poor poor Clark. All those women throwing themselves at him when the person he really wants is Lois. Can't wait for part II!
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What have you hidden, Nan? 
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Yay! New Nan story!  It's a great part, poor Clark though. First all the women hitting on him (including Lois, even if he doesn't realize it  ), and then he sees all those scenes at the Planet. No wonder he'd almost hit the next building.  Write more Nan! And give us more to read soon! Saskia
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Nan, cute and funny start.
Interesting that so many of the females at the Planet secretly harbor some romantic feelings for Clark, not just Lois.
Now that they will be isolated, am curious as to what Lois plan of attack will be.
Tank (who is curious as to what Nan's ultimate goal in this story is going to be)
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Nan A wonderful start! Tricia 
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Oooh, fun! And I love the title <g> It makes sense that a bunch of the women in the newsroom would be attracted to Clark  and Lois should be motivated by the competition Can't wait to see the rest... PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
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*snicker* While reading this, I did wonder why more women didn't throw themselves at Clark in the show. And Lois getting territorial, too.  Can't wait to see what happens... in the lobby, and the rest of the story!
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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So, I was reading this, and I thought, okay, another PML rewrite... Lois has been sprayed and she's all set to vamp Clark... so what's new? Wendy  (who hopes the weather is still good in SoCal and that there've been no more rolling blackouts since last week )
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I'm in awe too - and I want to know what you're feeding that Muse to make her so unflaggingly energetic (and can I have some?). An intriguing start to what looks to be shaping up to be a fun rewrite, Nan. Keep it coming! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
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Great start, Nan! I love PML and I am excited to see where you take this story . I loved the image of all those women ambushing poor Clark . And I'm looking forward to seeing what Lois does . - Alicia
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That startled him so much that he nearly missed the scene of Cat in the copy-room, and then he wished he had. The gossip columnist wasn't alone. Which, in itself, is fascinating. We know Cat likes Clark and that, in the show, she wasn't sprayed. So, would she have been stalking Clark along with everyone else, if she had been? I hadn't thought about it before, but it makes perfect sense to me that so many women were suddenly hunting poor Clark. Odd, really, that only Lois went for him in the show. Great start. Oh, I'm looking forward to mayhem when Clark tries to enlist Lois's help! Great title, too. Chris
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Ohhhh, I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! This is a wonderful beginning for your new story, Nan. Once more you manage to hook us in no time at all. (I think I have devoured most of your stories hungrily...  ) Hurry on, and keep up awesome work! Sira - still speechless
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That was great!! I have never watched PML  but I think it doesn't prevet me from enjoying this wonderful and funny story!! Waiting for more soon. AnnaBtG.
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I've also wondered why more women weren't hitting on Clark in the real episode. Of course on the flipside, why weren't more men hitting on Lois? I could just see Ralph coming on to her while affected by pheromones. Would he be even more obnoxious? Or would he turn into a little puppy dog? Tank would cringe at this, but Jimmy admitted in third season he had fantasies about Lois. Why didn't Jimmy go after Lois as well as the model, April? Yet Jimmy showed no interest whatsoever when he was with Lois. Quickly, he swooped into the alley nearest the Planet and made a hurried change to Clark Kent. He'd meet her in the lobby, he decided. Then, they could decide what to do. I can imagine Lois attacking him in the lobby. That should be amusing to see, er, read.
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Very fun start, Nan!!
Good observation! Why weren't more women hitting on Clark!!
Can't wait to see more!
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ROTFLMAO. Yep that does sound more logical! Poor Clark! too bad this is a gfic<g> More soon. Laura
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