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Ahh, the end? 
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Of course it's not the end! Herb even said so. Therefore, we expect the next installment of this saga forthwith. Fifthwith, even.
This was a very brief but very sweet cap for this story. I liked the way they all got together to outwit Luthor (and yes, the plastic ties should have been a dead giveaway to me as well as to Luthor!), even if you left him around to harass them in the future. This is a proper follow-up to Plane Storm. Great work, Dandello!
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
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Great ending! But I'd definitely be ready for more of the multiplaning Lois and Clark.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Since it's part of a series - I have several earlier pieces to work out, including the Year on New Krypton (where the humans repel Nor's invasion handily), Plane Tripping (where L&C do just that), something with Sir Charles and then there's the Harry Potter Xover set in 2012. BUT FIRST, I have to finish Shadows in Darkness. 
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Great story! I particularly loved the (maybe?) ending. Although I'm sorry to hear that there will be no more children for the Lois and Clark of the SR-Universe. Pity.  Btw, I'm glad to hear you're going to write the HP-X-over.  Mellie
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Originally posted by Olympe: Great story! I particularly loved the (maybe?) ending. Although I'm sorry to hear that there will be no more children for the Lois and Clark of the SR-Universe. Pity.
Btw, I'm glad to hear you're going to write the HP-X-over.
Mellie I never said Clark Joseph and his Lois wouldn't have more kids. Lets see, by 2012 Jason Peregrine will be 11, Esperanza Ester will be 5, Charles Jerome will be 4 and Samantha Elinora will be 2. Wells didn't mention Charles and Samantha because they hadn't been born yet.
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Hmm, sounds like you have a plan. 2012. I understand. 
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Hi, Great story!  Will love to read more about this two families. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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