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<DJ stumbles dizzily into the thread>

Sorry, I did so much eye rolling at what Sue said, that I made myself a little dizzy. <shakes it off so she can see the screen straight>

Yes, I was harassing you Sue. I've told you again and again that this fdk is yours too. <g> I learned a very important lesson over this harassment... I just might be able to pull off the "mom thing" if and when I'm ready... I seem to have a pretty good guilt trip. <g>

And LOLS - Yes, be afraid, be very afraid that I know that a crystal candlestick won't break when you hit someone over the head with it. No, it just so happens that I happen to be a klutz sometimes when I'm doing housework, and I have dropped, knocked over, whatever you want to call it, my crystal candlestick from a height of about seven feet, down to a hard linoleum floor - it didn't break. I think if it can live through that - thatI could knock someone in the head with it and it would survive. LOL.

I rock? <blushes - turns 5 shades of red> I don't know about that... but thanks for the compliment, my queen. <gets dizzy for a whole other reason...>


James! Or James' muse! I loved all the panicky "No's" Hah! Too funny! And the "aaarrrrggghhhh" - it made my day. <g> Yes, it was Dan. And eeeeoooooo to the diaper changing thing. Hee hee. Thanks for the fdk, James!!!


Laura S never feel silly for leaving a short note. NEVER! You hear me? Ahem <clears throat> seriously, I love fdk any way I can get it. I of course love the long, scrolling comments... they make me drool. But I totally adore hearing from anyone and everyone - I don't care if it's just one sentence "great story" - I LOVE it! Thanks for the "amazing" part. <g> Yay!


Hi Elisabeth! They weren't really being as cavalier as it looked about the whole Superman/Clark thing. Clark checked on the intruder by looking in on him... we all know that Clark can hear better than anyone - he could tell that the man was out cold. And the intruder was in another room, across the apartment -- he was in Lois's bedroom. Clark had coming in through the living room window. And don't forget that most of the time they were talking to each other, it would have been in muted voices - murmuring. The main time that they got loud was when Lois was yelling at Clark when he suddenly turned into ... well ... Clark. <g>

Glad you enjoyed the humor of the scene. I felt like it was this really scary thing that happened, and that in places it should be really frustrating and sad, but part of it just really spoke to me in humor - it just seemed to lend itself to a good laugh in places.

Thanks for the "emotions" comment. I told Sue that it felt really difficult to write this scene and get the "feelings" right - I told her I needed a lot of help to stay on track - glad to know we got it right. Thanks for the fdk!


Hi Jen! I'm so excited that we caught you off guard that Lois had lost more of her memory - that's too funny. And I'm glad you enjoyed the Dan bashing. <g> And even more glad that you are ready to hug Clark after all the abuse he's taken in this story. Heh. Thanks for the fdk!


Thank you again everyone for the fdk! I'm still not sure when 20 is coming out - it's been written but it's under scrutinization right now. <g> Plus, I wanted to make darn well sure that Sue got part 12 up sometime this century - so I kept nagging at her to leave this story alone and write on part 12 - it looks like she finally listened to me.

C-ya all soon!

-- DJ

This part was so great, but so sad at the same time. Lois has lost even more of her memory now. Does this mean that Clark is going to have to go back to hiding who he is when he's with her, or will he have to tell her every single day that he's Superman?

This story is going in a very interesting direction. The only good thing about her losing more of her memory is that she doesn't remember Dan! Not that I have any doubt that he'll still be an annoying third wheel.

Great part! Let's have the next!

Sorry to take so long to post FDK, but I wanted to say how much I loved this part. You are evil for taking Lois' memories away. Well, more away.

Huh, what? FDK - oh, yeah. Loved his greeting and we get the first hint that all may not be well in Lois-land when she calls him Superman in her thoughts.
Sorry to quote so much but this revelation was soooo good. Typical angry Lois when she first finds out and stunned speachless when she sees the ring.

<snort!> Lois Lane in the living room with the candlestick.

I know others quoted this, but this was oh so sad.
<sigh> WAFFy heaven.

OK, everything could still work out quickly. Lois for some unknown reason sits down on the sofa (maybe to contemplate the shocking revelations and feels the journal under the seat cushion. Add that to the voicemail message at Clark's and we could be back to the honey-colored stuff in her kitchen. Oh, and Clark needs to remember to give that list of scientists another look. Doesn't Dr. Petersen have access to the adjoining lab? I just know he's dirty.

Come back soon with the next part.
BJ

Ooooh, yay, more fdk!

Hi Symbolic! Oooh, all very good questions... and guess what? You can find out later tonight if you want. Part 20 will be posted tonight. Thanks for the fdk - I'm glad it's holding your interest and yes, it's nice that she can forget Dan, huh? <g> See you soon with part 20!


Hi BJ! <giggles and shouts at Sue - we're being called evil again!> I'm so glad you enjoyed the revelation - thanks.

I completed LOL at "Lois Lane in the living room with the candlestick". I LOVE to play CLUE... unfortunately hubby won't play with me... he usually loses to me, so he won't play <shrug>. But that was too funny.

<snort> I just love how optimistic you are in your last paragraph... ahhhh, if only you weren't reading a story written by evil authors <g>

<DJ ducks and runs out of the thread, yelling behind her -- part 20 later!!!>

Oh, my! Who was the man that came in through Lois’ window. Dan. Should have figured...


And Lois is back to not remembering what’s going on. Arggghhh.... Oh, crap! Now, she doesn’t even remember that Clark is Superman. Noooo....


And, ah, Sue. A crystal candlestick, especially if it’s lead crystal, is strong enough to kill someone...


Now, I just wonder if anyone knows why this thread is so wide. Weird.

Hi Nancy! Thanks so much for that fdk! Yay!

Told ya, told ya, toldyatoldyatoldya... Yes, a crystal candlestick is strong enough to... wait... KILL someone? <DJ won't ask how Nancy knows this> Ha ha ha! LOL!!!

Thanks Nancy!!!