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FDK: After the Storm 6 #39908 03/05/07 03:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis OP Pulitzer
OP Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Quote Long enough for Lois to start to feel nervous about joking with Superman. Yep, they're not quite in a comfortable relationship yet, not like Lois and Clark. Kryptonite on the scene, eh? Good part. More soon. Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39909 03/05/07 03:38 PM
Joined: Jun 2005 Posts: 74 NJ/NYC ultragirl Freelance Reporter
ultragirl Freelance Reporter Joined: Jun 2005 Posts: 74 NJ/NYC	Yay! Another part--finally! And another good part, no less. I liked the line Artemis pointed out, but my favorite passage is with Jason and the new baby (Esperanza right? I've forgotten...). Adorable and touching! Keep 'em coming! "Oh--as usual--dear." -Giles

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39910 03/05/07 04:23 PM
Joined: Aug 2006 Posts: 52 Indiana Shelley Freelance Reporter
Shelley Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2006 Posts: 52 Indiana	Cool love seeing Jason with his baby sister. Would love to see him and Lois married. Also love Lois and Clark joking around. Would love to see Jason talking on the phone to Richard or visiting him Shelley

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39911 03/05/07 08:28 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	This was a good chapter, Dandello, but too short by far. I'm ready to see some real volume of material! What about Superman's apparent weakness? What about his relationship with Lois? What about the people who saw Lois try to clean that smudge from Clark's face? Won't they be suspicious? Or is that one way to tell us that all is not well with our favorite Kryptonian? Tune in next chapter! Same super-time, same super-channel! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39912 03/06/07 03:55 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,483 Vancouver not BC, Washington n... Dandello Top Banana
Dandello Top Banana Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,483 Vancouver not BC, Washington n...	This Lois is trying to come to terms with what she now knows and (unlike the L&C Lois) is reverting to mothering to deal with it. This Clark is a brilliant dork. His face was smudged - not Supes. Lois is marking her territory and it doesn't really bother her if people figure out she and Clark are working things out. In this story, most of the people at the Planet have figured out Jason belongs to Lois & Clark and Richard is already old news. Sorry for the short segments but I've been doing my writing in hotel rooms the last week, with out my reference books. Big Apricot Superman Movieverse The World of Lois & Clark Richard White to Lois Lane: Lois, Superman is afraid of you. What chance has Clark Kent got? - After the Storm

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39913 03/07/07 04:31 AM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK: After the Storm 6 #39914 03/07/07 08:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part! More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

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