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#33774 10/27/06 02:08 PM
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LOl cute ending. I am glad she remebered and it is nice that you continued your little story. adorable. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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#33775 10/27/06 03:40 PM
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smile thanks Laura! Glad you liked it!!


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
#33776 10/27/06 11:30 PM
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Wow! I just found both stories this morning so I got to read them in one go. smile

I totally loved these! smile1

So much fun and a really unique revelation. I can't stop grinning at this point. laugh

And teh ending was just awwwwwwwwwwwww .

I want more!
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#33777 10/28/06 12:29 AM
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Delightful.

Now how about another verson of the sequel. Branch off from
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Suddenly, the details of a certain Beer Night came flooding back to her conscious mind. She'd dared him to an arm wrestling match... Yes, she remembered now. He'd vehemently refused and had argued that she had had too much to drink and then... Oh dear!
Instead of dragging Clark away to talk Lois flees the scene not quite ready to trust her recall and completely unwilling to admit that she can't trust her memory.

Someone, ahh, I went and looked, CC Aiken in "Clark Uncaged", has Lois making lists Superman / Not Superman as she collects evidence.

Someone else, nope can't find it drat, has her covering for him when she know but he does not yet know that she knows.

Use your story as a launch point and have Lois doing both the evidence collection and covering for clark at one and the same time.
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#33778 10/28/06 04:00 AM
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And teh ending was just awwwwwwwwwwwww .
<giggles> It was, wasn't it? blush

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Now how about another verson of the sequel.
Hehehe! I'll make a note of it and see... There are several places where I could start off from. And turn it into a much longer story, actually.

Ok, well... you got the wheels turning in my head now. If I come up with an alternate version, it's going to be all your fault. LOL!


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
#33779 10/30/06 02:51 AM
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Cute, Lara, cute.....

Sorry I don't have time for more feedback...

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