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Good Nan, this is developing  Elle is having a headache wondering where his son-in-law went  Myrtle's Florist and Hardware Do we know this Myrtle?  The muse be with you Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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This a great story and it's developing really nicely! I bet that Ellen gets a picture of that stalker and she doesn't even know it! I'm so hooked..can't wait to see what happens next.  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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This is good Nan I'm so hooked into the story.... Looking foward for more Meni
Is it a bird?" "Is it a plane?" "No, it's just a guy in tights and a cape!"
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I'm loving this... clues all over the place, I'm sure, if only we knew... Clark's got to be more careful. I mean, if his own mother-in-law can get evidence on him that quickly... But it is good to know she got a shot of the stalker Hurry, write more and post more! PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Another brilliant post!
More soon please!
James
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Hi, Wow! Great piece. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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This is a prime example of how an A plot driven story can keep one entranced and excited waiting for the next part.
I was reading along merrily and suddenly, there was no more. What a jip! Want more!
Tank (who is amazed by how much he is enjoying this even though Lois is in the worst condition possible and Ellen, a least favorite character, is a major player)
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Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Well, things are rolling along nicely, aren't they? Like others, I'm sure that it was a good thing I read carefully for future reference. <g> And I too have my suspicions about that guy who got in the way of Ellen's photo - although he could turn out to be scarlet and have a distinct fishy odour about him, of course. More soon please! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Nan A fantastic part! Great A-plot development!  I think that both Ellen and Clark need to be very careful.  I'm enjoying this immensely and can't wait to read the next part. Tricia 
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HI!! Just like the others...I'm sooo hoocked!!  I love the way this story is developing!. I can't wait to see Ellen's reaction when she finds out the truth about her son in-law! She's so sure he's cheating on Lois that she's going to faint!. I always thought Ellen was fun to see so I love stories where she's in. Looking forward finding out who's Mrs. Valenzuela's stalker!!  More soon! ...and thanks for sharing!
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Great part, Nan. Glad to see Bobby still has it. Hope Ellen doesn't get into serious trouble. Lol about "Myrtle's Flowers and Hardware." That's so out in left field for a name, I bet it's really true and there's something like that near you! I remember "Mike's Pet and Knife" store in Kona, Hawaii. We cracked up every time we drove by. Hmm. Could you post early next week so I can read some episodes before Australia? I won't be giving feedback after Wednesday. Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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LOL "Myrtle". I'm sure there's a plot twist in there..
I'm loving this story--I think my favorite bit is the hidden waffy moments interspersed with the adventure bits. The adventure gets me hooked and the sweet little interchanges b/w our favorite characters keeps me there.
Anyway, the faster you post, the happier I am. Just thought I'd put that out there.
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Nan,
another great part
keep this coming quickly
merry
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Nan, I'm following Ellen following Clark and I'm beginning to get worried that something is going to happen to her. Did the stalker see her? Did he get her keys? Will he follow her or will he end up in the Kent household where Lois isn't in any shape to kick him around?
And Ellen who is doggedly following Clark reminds me of one Mad Dog.
This is deliciously exciting. I can't wait to read more.
gerry
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