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Hi, Cute story. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Anna, interesting little story.
One can almost see Lois burning through one thing after another trying to find out what she was the BEST at. We can see the trademarked Lois Lane drive and determination as she practices her piano, but her concentration fails her yet again. Because she's just not into it.
It takes a bout of incredible frustration to finally get her to actually think about what it is she really likes to do, then she has her epiphany.
Nice story.
Tank (who is still waiting to find out what it is he wants to do with his life... not much time left)
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Hey Anna! Oh I loved this story  I loved the way you wrote Lois... I can really see her doing these things and acting that way. Very sweet  Keep writing, my friend. Raquel 
"It's not the years that count, it's the moments, right now as they happen." (Clark Kent to Lois Lane - Brutal Youth - S4)
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Good story -- I can just see Lois doing all that. We don't normally get to see the process by which Lois decides that journalism is for her -- this covers that ground very nicely! Thanks for sharing PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Anna A great premise! Very original!  Thanks for sharing this lovely story. I enjoyed it immensely. Tricia 
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A nice, cute little interlude, Anna - LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
The Musketeers
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Anna, I had tried to comment before... but my post got eaten by the big nasty internet bug... so I'll try again. I liked this story it was well done. I think it's often true that we don't notice the things we're good at, because we just get on a do them. Thank you Helga
Knowledge is knowing that tomatoes are a fruit.
Intelligence is not putting them in a fruit salad.
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Very nice Anna,
I enjoyed this
merry
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