I see that you're positioning all the players in place for the wedding..but will Luthor be able to get Clark in his kryptonite cage or not? Flying off to talk to mom and dad is a twist to the familiar.
Gah, I have no idea what Nan's going to make happen... and I love it to pieces! Nothing better to keep the suspense than keeping the reader in the dark...
Very interesting watching you move everyone into place, Nan -- rather like chess pieces.
And like all the good players, it's impossible to predict your next move.
Thus we need the next part.
Any time now . . .
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.