Once again, I commend you on the way you end your chapters.
I loved Lois' "this works, too" line!
That is just so "Lois"! (A nice touch of comic relief to contrast against the drama of Trask, Thompson, and kryptonite.)
I am enjoying this story very much, and will be looking forward to reading Chapter 21 next week (Monday? please?
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- Vicki