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Feedback goes here! Thanks 
Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
The courage to change the things I can,
And the wisdom to know the difference.
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Just 3 words for you: You suck, Diane!!! ... Aw, it just doesn't even work. Ya know I love ya. It was fun to read again, although your Clark does get better (or "even better" maybe I should say?). I want to see crazy Lois again in the next part, though. And finish "the part from HELL" !! 
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Poor Clark.  Guilt and liking Season 1 Lois. 
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I continue to enjoy this new take on season one.
Looking forward to more,
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great part.  He love watch her shine. After glancing at her watch, she picked up her things and packed up her briefcase, making a slow show of it before she finally turned to him again. "Don't think you're off the hook about Trask," she said. "I have some appointments."
And with that, she turned on her heels and stalked out, leaving him staring, open-mouthed in her wake. :rolleyes: That woman is going to kill that poor man. More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Top Banana
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Nice job..too short!  Poor Clark..stumbling under the weight of all that guilt and fear! Love Lois in this too! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Kerth
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This S1 Lois is soooo real  Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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