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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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Anna

A great part! thumbsup

I love their meeting with Bobby. clap Their banter is extremely well-written and lots of fun. laugh

I'm enjoying this immensely and look forward to reading the next part.

Tricia cool

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Anna!

I'm so glad you posted. You already know what I think about it but still...

It's a supergreat part and I can't wait for next one.

The Bobby scene is priceless. I also like Lois and Clark teasing exchanges and how you have a grasp on this first season's Lois. It's also great to let us have glimpse of her softer side, makes her more human, I mean, it's good to see she's not ALL workdriven! laugh

Keep writing,

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Good part!! smile

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Good instalment.

Your Bobby was a lot more disgusting than the one on the series. I'm surprised Lois didn't kill him for taking food under false pretenses. wink

This relationship is really starting to take off. I wonder what will happen to mess it up.

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good part Anna
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