The first story is Chaos Unspool and comments on it can be found here .

The second story is Chaos Reintegrate and comments for this one are here .

These were posted in two different sections, with a name change halfway... I'd apologize, but instead I'm going to claim I meant it to be chaos, to go with the series title wink

PJ
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"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K