Bounce this up since author has come back to complete it.
Uhm... there seems to be an error for part 5. It leads to part 5 of a different Story with a similar Name...
The correct links is:
http://www.lcficmbs.com/ubb/ubbthreads.php/ubb/showflat/Number/56505/Searchpage/1/Main/10065/Words/%22Kara+King%22/Search/true/strange-visitor-s-from-other-planet-s-5#Post56505
I fixed it. It probably has a bit to do with the TOC problems the last system upgrade caused.
Mike