Part 1

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Poll #1

Part 2

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Poll #2

Part 3

Part 3 comments and suggestions

Part 4

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Part 4 Poll

Part 5

Part 5 comments and suggestions

Part 5 poll

"Should I pause the story?" poll

Part 6

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Poll 6

Part 7

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Part 8

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