Beta request - 08/14/10 03:12 PM
You guys!
I just finished a fic!
But because I haven't written any L&C fic since 2006 (shame on me), and it's actually been about three years that I've barely written any fic at all, I would really like to have someone else's opinion, particularly regarding characterization and writing style (I think it's too rich in dialogue and too poor in everything else, maybe I could get some pointers on where to elaborate? Stuff like that).
It's about 10 pages long, comedic (or so I hope), it takes place in Season 1 and it's based on this old, old thread . So basically, it's Lois trying out weird diets.
Any takers?
Thanks in advance,
AnnaBtG.
I just finished a fic!
But because I haven't written any L&C fic since 2006 (shame on me), and it's actually been about three years that I've barely written any fic at all, I would really like to have someone else's opinion, particularly regarding characterization and writing style (I think it's too rich in dialogue and too poor in everything else, maybe I could get some pointers on where to elaborate? Stuff like that).
It's about 10 pages long, comedic (or so I hope), it takes place in Season 1 and it's based on this old, old thread . So basically, it's Lois trying out weird diets.
Any takers?
Thanks in advance,
AnnaBtG.