Beta Needed - 02/21/10 01:30 PM
Hello!
I've been hard at work on a Lois and Clark story, "Some Things are Meant to Be," and it is now (sorta) complete, so I'm in need of a beta reader! It's PG-13, a little over 100,000 words, and it begins with Clark coming to the Daily Planet.
I'm generally all right with grammar, though I probably have some stupid mistakes and awkward sentences scattered throughout that need pointing out.
My primary need, however, is someone who can help with plot and characterization. I'm not sure whether all my plot threads flow well and are connected properly--I think some may need to be severed or expanded, but I need a second opinion. As for characterization-- I need someone who can look at my characters and their development for believability.
If you want any more details, you can email me at kythor@gmail.com.
Many many thanks in advance for your consideration!
Deja Vu
I've been hard at work on a Lois and Clark story, "Some Things are Meant to Be," and it is now (sorta) complete, so I'm in need of a beta reader! It's PG-13, a little over 100,000 words, and it begins with Clark coming to the Daily Planet.
I'm generally all right with grammar, though I probably have some stupid mistakes and awkward sentences scattered throughout that need pointing out.
My primary need, however, is someone who can help with plot and characterization. I'm not sure whether all my plot threads flow well and are connected properly--I think some may need to be severed or expanded, but I need a second opinion. As for characterization-- I need someone who can look at my characters and their development for believability.
If you want any more details, you can email me at kythor@gmail.com.
Many many thanks in advance for your consideration!
Deja Vu
