Okay, I've been secretly working on this...thing...but I guess it's time to come out into the open and ask for help. (Well, more help. The last Beta I had got swallowed by RL, or so he says...)

So.

Do you know much about angst?

Do you have a spelling/grammer checker?

Are you willing to go through pages and pages of complete *drivel* about flat characters who do nothing but cry at the drop of a hat, written by an impatient author notorious for Beta-Abuse?

Are you still reading this post?

Yay! Okay, the part about Beta-abuse may no longer apply (though the "drivel" still stands) since I've learned my manners (hopefully...) and anyway, I only have partial internet access now.

The story is incomplete, though a large chunk is written. I have a vague idea where I want to go, but at this moment there seems to be a short wall to step over. I'd really like to get some comments before continuing, though, in case I have to do a complete 180 somewhere.

So...any takers?

*looks at all the FoLCs running away*

I wouldnt mind

Feel free to send it to me as well. I usually have a pretty good eye for spelling/grammar/syntax/etc and I seem to meet all of your other requirements.

Send it on over. rbudde2 at yahoo dot com