This is the translation of a poem I wrote back in school. I've wanted to share it here, for years. But well -wrong language. I hope I tackled the task of translating it.

Let me know what you think.

Your poem would be truly impressive even if English were your first language. That you were writing in a foreign language makes it doubly so. If you have any other poetry, please do post it.

Joy,
Lynn

Thank you very much, Lynn.

Just read this. Then I found the feedback link and found that Lynn had read my mind and said everything. You are a better writer in English than I am.

That's very kind of you to say, Shallowford. Thank you very much.