I've noticed before that no one wants to start a comments thread. If you feel that my efforts are worth it, please leave comments here. This should be the comments thread for the whole story.

Nan

Great to return to this storyline. I think you posted chapter 5 again as chapter 6

No, I was in a rush and overlapped.

Thanks for dropping a comment.

Nan

Sorry for such a quick note this morning. Got caught up when I saw there was a new story, read all 5 chapters and was therefore late to work. Great characterization of the patrol. I tend to forget how bad they can be given all the ones who have joined the team. I always love your stories. If you are going back to past series when this is done maybe we can revisit the Home series next. Thanks for the hours of reading over the years.


Andy

I have discovered that being retired means you have less time than ever to do what you want to do <g>.

The story I am trying to work on in my spare time is "Smallville", which is the last story of the Four Days to Nightfall series. In the meantime, however, I am trying to fill in other stories of the Terran Underground series. These take less work because they are already written, either typed or handwritten and merely require typing onto the computer and some judicious editing. After I get finished with "Smallville" I may go back to Home when I can (or if I get some idea before then, I may write one. You never know.)

Anyway, thanks for commenting. It's nice to know that someone is still reading and liking the stories.

I fixed part 6 and got rid of the extraneous overlap.

This story was like getting to hang out with an old friend. It had all the getting plotting and thrills of the stories I read a few years ago and added a little more to the underground world. Seems like psychic power packs are destined to find each other. Thanks for bringing me back once again. You are still one of my favorites authors (your stories were what initially got me into reading fan fiction).

Andy

Thanks, Andy.

I'll post more as soon as I can. I'll have to type them onto my computer now, since I have run out of the ones my daughter typed for me, that only require editing. There are a lot more TU stories, as you can see if you check the Timeline. My time is more limited than it used to be, but I'm still trying to fill out the series.

Nan

Ooh, new TU story! Yay! I should come here more often, obviously... just read part one, off to read the rest...

and now I've read all of them... oh, you should have heard me chortling when I realized what Paul Carson was in for... I love these stories. I actually came here tonight to find the timeline, 'cause there are TU stories that I haven't yet downloaded, and I want to get them while they're still available... but finding a whole new story was a wonderful bonus!

Thanks for continuing to entertain us!

Thanks for the comments, Pam. I was wondering if I was wasting my time.

Definitely not a waste of time
Always fun watching the Jills plans fall apart.

Janine