FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) - 07/19/11 02:25 PM
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Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) - 08/04/11 05:00 PM
I thought it was very good a nice story is there going to be any more or was it a one off ?
All the best
All the best
Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) - 08/04/11 05:24 PM
Mpj: Thank you for the comment. 
And welcome to the Boards!
Originally I wrote this as a description as how my character Jones Porter became Jones MacEntosh (how she met Agent MacEntosh - her husband). I was trying to write a mystery novel, but it never panned out (Plot A never being my strong suit), but the short story remained. Maybe someday I'll pick up my Jones mystery story and complete it as it is already plotted out in my head.
And welcome to the Boards!Originally I wrote this as a description as how my character Jones Porter became Jones MacEntosh (how she met Agent MacEntosh - her husband). I was trying to write a mystery novel, but it never panned out (Plot A never being my strong suit), but the short story remained. Maybe someday I'll pick up my Jones mystery story and complete it as it is already plotted out in my head.
Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) - 08/05/11 04:12 AM
I thought this was a really good little story! I liked it- characters were easily likable, and holds promise for future expansion if you so choose... Especially liked Agent MacEntosh's flirty, never-give-up style! 
Good job! 
Good job!