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Posted By: Mister Data FDK: Giant Killer: 1 - 01/17/06 09:29 AM
Yes! YES! YEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!

More Terran Underground!!!!!!

I will leave a review later..

James.
Posted By: sheilah Re: FDK: Giant Killer: 1 - 01/17/06 11:13 PM
What an odd assignment! How does Julia end up meeting Mark when she's hanging out with Alan and he and Mark can't be seen together? Julia's thought about 'trols also explains why she's so suspicious of Mark later. She's gorgeous, but I really didn't get a sense of her age, size, or coloring--unless I missed it completely--and I think that would have been helpful at this point.

Off to read the next part!
Posted By: Nan Re: FDK: Giant Killer: 1 - 01/18/06 07:32 AM
This is a moderately long story, so some of that comes in the next part. Julia's first meeting with Mark is unique, and happens a couple more parts down the line.

Nan
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK: Giant Killer: 1 - 01/18/06 07:50 AM
Ah...A wonderful post, and I see that Part 2 is out already! hyper

I like getting in the head of characters. Did Alan pull a psychic wammy on her about her name or is he just that convincing?

James
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