Well, I've gone and done it again. ::sighs:: I just HAD to listen to my muse... ::shakes head:: Not like I had a choice in the matter. She grabbed the back of my head and slammed it into the keyboard... somehow, these 'word' things appeared on the screen. They made a slight logical sense, so I sent the chapter off to Lab Rat.

So, does it sink, or swim? ::arches an eyebrow::

It very much swims for me, but then I'm your mother and I'm prejudiced!

I would like to see the part about the reasons for Sabriel's separation from Griffin drawn out a little bit more. It's a great reason for keeping her separate from him, though.

Good job!

More!!

love,
Mom