A Clones Worth- Comments - 10/03/03 01:08 PM
Well, any comments on A Clones Worth ? *Cackles evily* Maybe Mom'll read it now, eh? NEways, JE NE! (Japanise...I think...)
Re: A Clones Worth- Comments - 10/03/03 02:11 PM
Still mysterious... I like it. For some reason, although I still can't claim I'm really aware of what's going on, I'm curious to read more.
Post the next part soon.
AnnaBtG.
Post the next part soon.
AnnaBtG.
Re: A Clones Worth- Comments - 10/03/03 02:12 PM
Okay, okay, so mom did read it. And it's good. I enjoyed it a lot, although I do see some editing I have to help you with - spelling and a couple of grammar points.
The dream sequence at the start is a lot better now.
Also, remember what I told you; this crowd is definitely going to pick up on the fact that your villian is named Trask!
Mom
The dream sequence at the start is a lot better now.
Also, remember what I told you; this crowd is definitely going to pick up on the fact that your villian is named Trask!
Mom
Re: A Clones Worth- Comments - 10/09/03 03:32 PM
Yes, yes, all in good time mom. NEways, glad you liked it! 
Now all I have to do, is come up with the next part. Uh oh... Uh... Have to go! 
Now all I have to do, is come up with the next part. Uh oh... Uh... Have to go!