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Posted By: Nan Comments: Slave Race 23 - 05/15/03 01:12 PM
As you can see, things are getting serious. laugh

Comments?
Posted By: Bumpkin Re: Comments: Slave Race 23 - 05/15/03 09:02 PM
oooh I am on the edge of my seat here! this is fascinating.. I must say that each time it comes to the end of a section I feel an almost physical pain
Posted By: Nethra Re: Comments: Slave Race 23 - 05/16/03 07:11 AM
Wow!

Nethra
Posted By: Mister Data Re: Comments: Slave Race 23 - 05/16/03 11:03 AM
This is soooooo well written.

I like that Karl is having issues with what he is doing and being made to do.

I also like that fact that Karl has a little Cecil in him. It is a very realistic touch.

James
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