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Posted By:
Nan
Comments: Slave Race--18
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05/10/03
08:09 PM
Comments and constructive criticism welcome.
Posted By:
Mister Data
Re: Comments: Slave Race--18
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05/12/03
01:08 PM
I like the folding back of the plot for added detail.
Very nice.
I just can't wait to see the look on Cecil's face when he finds out that Karl is a Terran Psychic.
James
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