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Posted By: daneel FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/11/03 08:57 AM
Yes!!!! hyper

Cute story... the pre-date rituals!! laugh

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Posted By: KathyB Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/11/03 09:42 AM
That was beautiful, Laura! So achingly romantic. smile

My favorite part was how they held hands walking out of the newsroom ... I can totally see how this first jump into acknowledging what's between them would be so thrilling.

Very, very nice. smile

Kathy
Beautiful! clap clap Congratulations!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/12/03 02:24 AM
Laura

This is beautifully written. It ties in so well with the song lyrics. So romantic! smile1
I enjoyed it immensely.

Tricia cool
Posted By: LabRat Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/12/03 06:06 AM
Lovely, Laura, and some nice use of the lyrics in there too. clap

Very sweet.

LabRat smile
Posted By: Xanabee Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/12/03 06:12 AM
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The restless warrior woman and the star-crossed voyager man embarked on the long journey of life. But now they were together, and being together was so much stronger than being alone. The two lonely souls had finally found their way home.
Beautiful! clap
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/12/03 12:22 PM
Oh I love this!

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 Lois tilted her head too quickly for
Clark to avert his gaze. Their eyes met, and
their gazes locked unwavering. It felt like a 
twisting kaleidoscope, the mirage of colors and 
textures refracted in hundreds of different 
directions creating a strangely unsettling 
whirlwind of emotions.

Love. Hopeless, shameless, unwavering.
 
twins

I've never used UBB codes before. Sorry it's so narrow.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/13/03 05:00 PM
Aw sweet! Laura
Posted By: merry Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/13/03 06:06 PM
Laura
very well done
beautiful
merry
Posted By: Julie S Re: FDK-Can You Feel the Love Tonight - 11/13/03 10:17 PM
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Thanks for your comments, everyone! I am glad you all enjoyed my little fic laugh .
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