Nqoire, this is truly Great Tank ending!

It's very well written too: your Lex is suitably proud and arrogant, reflecting on his political ambitions. Buy off all of Congress - yeah, that's so Lex.

Just one tiny nitpick: I can't quite see Lex saying 'Great!' - but I could very clearly see him saying 'Excellent' or something similar.

Well done!


Wendy

Nqoire

This is fantastic.
Extremely well-written!

Tricia

LOL! We can't say this wasn't as advertised!

I love the comedic touches -- Clark ranking not being able to rescue someone in a shoot out up there with his muse going AWOL and his milk going bad. <bg>

Very funny!

Kathy

Actually, Wendy, this was MY mistake. You can see it if you read the original post .

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Thank you for replying my challenge, Nquoire.
Needless to say, I loved the result Great ideas and excellent writing.

Keep up the good work
AnnaBtG.

Oh, I'm glad you posted, Anna - I hadn't realised that the first half of the story was yours until I came here and read your post. It didn't occur to me to go check back to the actual challenge before reading the story.

Well done to both of you then!!

The first scene was great <g> with Luthor at his smug and slimy best. And the set-up was ingenious.

And for Nqoire's addition:

Oh dear. <g> The poor boy is depressed, isn't he?

Hmmmmmmmm...with a start like this maybe we have a double act to rival Wendy and Tank for dual-author challenges.

LabRat

I don't think we'll ever rival Wendy and Tank. But we can follow in their impossible-to-fill footsteps.

Thanks to all y'all for the comments! They are so encouraging. And of course, thanks to Anna for a wonderful challenge.