Well, you had me laughing. Very funny, very cheesy, just perfect. You even threw in the infamous, overused "the kiss deepened" line! Classic!

Ems:)

Truly funny!

No, no, no, you can't end it there! You violated the number one rule of Mary Sue fanfic -- when the show involves a couple that is destined to be together, Mary Sue becomes the "little sister" character that is responsible for making the two main characters realize they are in love with each other by being the only person who really understands them and who they trust enough to confide in. Of course, this now means you must write a sequel.

Lynn, very cute.

Kathy (who cannot write badfic to save her life, LOL)

'Well' done, Lynn!!

Hope you don't mind it included in my site... when it's ready... if it's ever ready...

Keep writing.
AnnaBtG.

Cute Lynn
merry

ROTFL!!! Nicely done!

ROTFL!! That was absolutely hilarious. This definitely calls for a sequel.

OMG, that was funny! ( with laughter) and the part where Clark says he doesnt love Lois made it the Mother of all badfic, swear to God.