And comments are a great bonus!

Just finished this part.

Good job!

Only one thing. In the future scene when Zod is talking to Tess he said - 'dare defies' and it should be 'dares to defy'

Can't wait for the next chapter.

It may not be grammatically correct, but I took it from the scene itself. I'll listen again, but I'm pretty sure he says 'dare defies me.'

Maid,

I have been advised that it is OK to clean up mistakes made in the dialogue in the series when you are writing.