LOL adorable. I can't wait until they both wake up. Laura

Oh my cow!

That was too funny!

I loved it and can't wait for the next part - but what I loved about this part was the childish banter - the same stuff I loved about SG ["Lois is in trouble, Lois is in trouble"] which I'm afraid may be gone by part 2 .

But that's okay - I'm looking forward to it anyway .
Carol

Sorry I didn't send it to you, I didn't want to bug you with it!

I love the childish banter in SG, I wish there had been more of it. I think I've watched those 'childish' parts about 50 times and it just get funnier and funnier. I liked when Superman teases Lois with the Space rats and runs across the room, I love the look on his face.

Bug away .
Carol

This was so funny! I can't wait to see what part two brings!

But you are still working on Eyewitness, right?

SG had never been one of my favourite eps. I've tried to like it and I just can't. (although it's probably the Mr Schott/Ms Duffy dynamic, and not the adults acting like kids, that annoys me more than anything)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. So cute!

Oh, so funny! That's adorable!!!!

Ann

The banter was fantastic. But the best part was the childish trust. He has no secrets to protect because the only secrets healthy children have are, "She likes you." A breath of fresh air.


Elisabeth

Too funny! I love the idea of them waking from the space rats and they are in Kansas, together.

Hurry with part 2

Great comedy. You do realize though, that you now have two stories continuations people will come after you for

Michael