You could feel the chill in the air.

Looks like there's nothing left to this story but for Clark to go back to Smallville and for Lois to be so disillusioned (Maybe coming upon a Superman groupie) that she decides to be really vicious and publish Superman's True Idenity so that all the world can know he's a fraud.

Seems like a fun ending.

Well, Lois knows and Clark knows that Lois knows. But things are still a mess. Go figure. Can't wait for next Sunday.

Hi Juliet and welcome to Fury

I sure hope that I still have some stuff left to dig out for Lois and Clark. But you are right, right now Lois is going full speed towards rock bottom.

I. Am. Not. Going. To. Do. A. Tank. Ending.
I hope.

Beth, glad to see I didn't shock you into hating poor Lois. But then I did tell you once the Kaylie/Jon situation on the island was not totally unfamiliar to me

Michael

Hi Juliet and welcome to Fury [/QUOTE}

I will admit, I'm a lurker and I tend to be a horrible feedbacker, but I am reading and I am liking this story.


I sure hope that I still have some stuff left to dig out for Lois and Clark. But you are right, right now Lois is going full speed towards rock bottom. I. Am. Not. Going. To. Do. A. Tank. Ending.

I don't like your Lois anymore. She drugs Clark then has sex with him, clearly her goal in drugging him in the first place, then makes him think he took advantage of her while she was drugged.

She seems to have begun to believe her own lies. Clearly this Lois and Clark won't be able to get past this web of lies till they are in their 90s!

Fun tale but Clark needs to grow a backbone and Lois needs to find herself pregnant.

I always like it when Lois finds herself pregnant with Clark's child!

Ann

Hi, sorry about me not giving you any feedback before today. The story is really great, but I haven’t had time for feedback since my life turned upside-down. It’s my last year of college and I’m swallowed up with work, I’m only giving feedback on the stories that I’ve begun reading in the past, when my life was ok. Like Beth’s.

But then I read this:

And I’m like. Wow, this totally needs to happen! It would be just perfect, better than the Tank Ending that Juliet suggested. With me then it’s three, so can we please have it?

Keep on writing, it’s really, really, really, really great story. Can’t wait to see the conclusion!

Good to know, Juliet

Pitchforks I can deal with.

/me puts on Frankenstein's Monster mask to scare the little towns people.

But blowtorches? Seriously? First someone mentions using hot glue on Clark in some kinky exercise, now there is talk of blowtorches. What ever happened to good old eighteen century weapons? I don't like your Lois anymore. She drugs Clark then has sex with him, clearly her goal in drugging him in the first place, then makes him think he took advantage of her while she was drugged. </strong></font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Hi Framework!
Actually she didn't want to sleep with him, but just make him believe he would have if nothing had intervened.

No, she doesn't. At least that's what I tried to get across. Hm... But as far as getting past this mess. Well, They are in their '90s right now. 1995 to be precise

Okay, the growth bit I cannot reply to in the gfic thread

Hi dede! Great to see you here

Hm. Three votes already for a pregnancy. I swear that I had written a certain segment in part 8 before this suggestions were posted. Ask my Betas, they will vouch for me

Aaww, thanks, dede

Michael