I think it is a wonderfu| beginning and I would love to see how it continues


[Just adding the part no. into the post header - LabRat]

Ditto .
Carol

oh thank you both for commenting! That means a lot. I'm working on the next part.

So uh, to sound like the newbie I am, feedback to a story has a FDK thread?

Yep - The drug known as FDK, also known as feedback, is the addictive substance fic writers can't get enough of .

I'm waiting for part 2 - I loved how Jonathan was the reason Sam made the connection to Clark/Sman!

Carol

Wow that was really a great insight to Sam's character. loved it. I hope you continue it. Laura

I love this. I have never read a fic with this particular spin, and I love it. Wow - you most definitely should continue. Please? Pleeeeease?

Nice start. I also liked your use of Sam's pov. Makes him more human.

I, too, liked your Sam's POV. Interesting. Please continue!

(Uhhh... mind if you spell Jonathan Kent's name like this ?)

Ann

Ok now why didn't my spellcheck catch that mispelling of Jonathan's name, for crying out loud?. Sorry! Just goes to show that my proof reading skills are very lacking, LOL, Thank you for pointing it out to me!

Yes, continue!

~Sheila

Wow, great start. And yes: you should continue this

Oh thank you! Definitely will be continuing - working on chapter 3 right now