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They're just my protection wink

And awww! WAFFy and sweet and mwahahahahaaaa!

*cuddles on cloud*
Posted By: Saskia Re: FDK: The Heart of the Matter - The end! - 03/28/08 01:20 PM
You need a lesson or two more in evilness, but dang, you got the hang of it so quickly!

And awwwwwww! That's a totally sweet ending. More like it should've been, with her figuring the secret out so soon, and realising just what it is that she feels for her mild mannered partner. laugh

I'm glad you could be pursuaded to post this so soon. wink

Saskia (still smug for seeing this early goofy )
Awww! /me goes all melty

I do love fics where they just get to the heart of the matter instead of all that dancing-around -the-issues they did in the show. So it was a good choice you made for the title!

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"Marry me, Lois," he said, his gaze firmly locked with hers.
*WAFFy sigh* Yeah, I'll never get tired of reading/hearing that.

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She flashed him an almost-teasing smile. "I thought you'd never ask."
Now THAT'S an ending! clap
Sweet and waffy and feel good

smile Michael
It was all the things that everyone's said. My only quibble (and it's a small one) is that I think she really figured it out as Superman was telling her all about Luthor, and he was too wrapped up in the evidence he was presenting to notice her extra-wide eyes and jaw dropped even further, or he just chalked it up to her surprise at learning what Superman knew but couldn't prove.

I like the fact that she figured it out on her own. I also like her lack of anger with him for keeping such a secret. While having a second identity is a pretty big thing to keep from someone you claim to love, there aren't any laws to force him to reveal it. And up until the point where she confesses she knows the secret, he doesn't really know what she'd do with that information. So it works on any number of levels.

Stay evil, okay? devil It's not all that bad, actually.
Posted By: carolm Re: FDK: The Heart of the Matter - The end! - 03/28/08 07:24 PM
Better smile .
Carol
I like how WAFFy this was. Even though this isn't my favorite Moonfic, I like it nonetheless.

Elisabeth
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She flashed him an almost-teasing smile. "I thought you'd never ask."
Great ending!! laugh

Camy
Posted By: LaraMoon Re: FDK: The Heart of the Matter - The end! - 03/29/08 11:24 PM
hehehe! Well, I'm glad you all thought this was a better ending. wink

I've got an idea for something where Lois would give Lex the boot, so that should come soon-ish, I guess. Assuming this video clip doesn't drive me insane first. *giggles*

Thanks for the comments!
Yay! I just stumbled upon this story. Lovely. I'm glad you continued the story and had them all Waffy. *sigh* What a great way to start my day.

I love when I'm surprised and Lois not jumping at Superman's proposal had me going dizzy . Then when she said she knew he was Clark I was like jawdrop . Excellent Job!!

I do think there should be a third part with Lex getting nailed to the floor and Clark getting nailed in an entirely different manner. angel-devil
Posted By: LaraMoon Re: FDK: The Heart of the Matter - The end! - 04/02/08 09:29 AM
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I do think there should be a third part with Lex getting nailed to the floor and Clark getting nailed in an entirely different manner. angel-devil
Would Lex being sent to jail work for you? I think I can do that...

As for Clark getting nailed... um... isn't the guy usually the one doing the nailing? Is that your way of asking for a sequel to my "other" story?

/ducks and runs.
Lara, I loved the story. Sorry I’m late, but it’s been crazy at college. I liked the other ending better kept me imagining. laugh But I couldn’t just not read this ending. They are both good. Nice job. thumbsup
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