Comments -- Imbalance Part 66 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Day One, and everything's quiet... but it won't last.

Phil

YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! It`s back finally!!

sunshine

I hope the next part is posted soon, Phil

but I liked the interaction with Cat and Ralph

Jose

I realize you're going to put Lois and Clark through the wringer with Luthor's plots and schemes, but knowing your love of good old Lex, I look forward to seeing him barbecued and his henchman, Tom Everett, suitably chastised as well.

Nan

Ditto what Nan said.

Too bad a thermal grenade won't be in the offering this time...

James

Hi,

Great piece.

I was missing this story

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Clark was there when she got back to her desk and she quickly filled him in on their new assignment -- and Perry's reasons for giving it to them. He had a few thoughts on the subject, including one whispered idea that she agreed to without hesitation, and they put their heads together to discuss what sort of "good questions" they might ask at the press conference... and for the second time that day, failed to notice an eavesdropper.

She notice Ralph but not the spy?

Did Perry notice that they have a shadow? And did this on purpose.

More soon, Please.

MAF

Phil

Another excellent part!

Tricia

Phil
you're back
don't wait so long next time
great part
more soon please
merry

Thank you all for the kind words.

And Nan, thank you in particular for a certain idea... More, I shall not say here and now, but I now have the perfect way to deal with something...

James, why might not a thermal grenade be in the offing this time?

I certainly haven't said anything to rule it out...

Maria, Lois spotted Ralph because he came out of the elevator, which attracts attention of itself, and because he wanted to talk to her. The mysterious eavesdropper(s?), however, was just standing around, listening to what was being said, and Lois and Clark were concentrating on what they were doing at the time. Which may indicate something about who was listening, or it may not; deponent sayeth not -- yet.

And to daneel, merry and everyone else who is urging me not to take so long about writing this... well, I would if I could, FoLCs. It's a busy time of year for me, so I promise nothing, but rest assured I want to push this along as quickly as circumstances and my Muse allow.

Phil

Hi Tarkas,

Where is my monthly dose of "Imbalance"

MAF