FDK - Death in the City 12 - 05/09/07 10:44 AM
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Comments, please.
Comments, please.
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 05/09/07 02:44 PM
And there we have it. Another TOGoM rewrite that ends happily ever after. (Funny how that seems to always happen).
Nice little twist, well laid out and executed.
A worthy addition to the most rewritten episode in all of L&C fandom.
Tank (who thinks you could have left Jimmy in the trunk of the car... forever)
Nice little twist, well laid out and executed.
A worthy addition to the most rewritten episode in all of L&C fandom.
Tank (who thinks you could have left Jimmy in the trunk of the car... forever)
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 05/09/07 02:58 PM
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Tank (who thinks you could have left Jimmy in the trunk of the car... forever)
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 05/10/07 12:18 PM
It was sweet to give Jimmy his life--and a byline. 
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 05/11/07 10:27 AM
I really enjoyed this story. The pacing, characters, everything.
Thanks !
Thanks !
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 01/20/08 05:13 AM
I just read the story at the archive (why did I miss it here? 
) and I just wanted to tell that it's really a great story. I think by now I've read 2000 re-writes of TOGOM but as far as I remember it's the first one where Clark actually really got shot. Great story 
) and I just wanted to tell that it's really a great story. I think by now I've read 2000 re-writes of TOGOM but as far as I remember it's the first one where Clark actually really got shot. Great story
Re: FDK - Death in the City 12 - 01/20/08 02:49 PM
check out Unexplained Events by Stopdontquit - Clark gets shot in the back and is paralyzed.