FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 01:41 AM
Well, here I get to be first, and I don't even have a thing to quote.
Great part, Nan. I loved it!
Nancy
Great part, Nan. I loved it!
Nancy
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 06:22 AM
That part with Wells... will this be the last story of the HOME series? 
Jose
Jose
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 07:42 AM
My worry with the Wells comment is that Lori and Clark are only going to have one child!
Loved this part, though. Well done all around.
A girl! Sweet!
Jackie
BTW- I'd love to see the conversation between Lori's parents and Clark's grown kids! Please, Nan, let us see that conversation!
Loved this part, though. Well done all around.
A girl! Sweet!
Jackie
BTW- I'd love to see the conversation between Lori's parents and Clark's grown kids! Please, Nan, let us see that conversation!
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 10:07 AM
Quoted from Jackie, Not necessarily. It could be that sometime in the future, Mary is key to saving the whole family from an evil plot by Tempus. On the other hand, she could just be critical mass - Utopia needed 5 Kryptonian/Human (or Krypterrans 
) to keep the superpowered gene from dwindling in future generations.
Great part Nan. I'm looking forward to the conclusion.
BJ
Quote
My worry with the Wells comment is that Lori and Clark are only going to have one child!
) to keep the superpowered gene from dwindling in future generations.Quote
The door chime sounded at that moment, and Clark spoke. "Open," he said. Lori looked up, a little surprised, to see Superwoman, Tan-El, Puma and Shooting Star in the doorway.
"I thought," Clark said quietly to Rob and Mariann, "that you would like to meet Mary's brothers and sisters."
"I thought," Clark said quietly to Rob and Mariann, "that you would like to meet Mary's brothers and sisters."
Great part Nan. I'm looking forward to the conclusion.
BJ
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 02:01 PM
I was trying really hard not to cry toward the end. I don't know why I was trying really hard not to cry, but then I often don't know why I feel the way I do.
James
James
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 02:14 PM
Nan - wonderful as always!!! I'm so glad to see how Mariann has matured.
Nan did say she couldn't introduce/flesh out everyone in one story [I forget what part it was] and seemed to indicate that it's not the end [translation: we will hunt her down if we have to - man I'm threatening to hunt down a lot of people lately!]
Can't wait for the next part even though it means the end of this one
.
Carol
Nan did say she couldn't introduce/flesh out everyone in one story [I forget what part it was] and seemed to indicate that it's not the end [translation: we will hunt her down if we have to - man I'm threatening to hunt down a lot of people lately!]
Can't wait for the next part even though it means the end of this one
.Carol
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 05:14 PM
This was a very good installment. I'm so glad that
we will get to meet his older children the next chapter.
I really hope you will be inspired to write more
about Clark, Lori and their daughter (and hopefully future siblings for her). It would be fun to see Clark being a father of a young child after so long. Oh and we never did get to see the barbeque that was postponed.
Patti
we will get to meet his older children the next chapter.
I really hope you will be inspired to write more
about Clark, Lori and their daughter (and hopefully future siblings for her). It would be fun to see Clark being a father of a young child after so long. Oh and we never did get to see the barbeque that was postponed.
Patti
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 05:39 PM
Re: FDK: Home Vendetta 9 - 04/05/07 08:03 PM
Yeah, what they said. It brought back labor-room memories ... which may explain why I was so muddled in the middle -- when the nurse mentioned "Dr. Klein" I was thinking "Bernie?? that doesn't make sense..." and I'd totally forgotten about Rhonda! Silly me...
Good talk with the Lyons, too.
PJ
Good talk with the Lyons, too.
PJ