FDK-Death in the City 9 - 03/23/07 07:07 PM
Clark is still in the hospital. Reviews? 
Re: FDK-Death in the City 9 - 03/24/07 12:44 PM
I'm really enjoying this fic!! Thanks for the update 
George Nelson. . .help me remember--that's Baby Face righ??
I like the statute of limitations comment--I always thought that the clones were having it a bit to easy--leagally.
Come on guys--don't discount Lex--being dead never stops him from causing trouble. 
I still feel greatful for this!!
Typical Lois--even after such a traumatic experience! 
The whole attempted asassination scene was very well writen--if to long to quote here. I love the three of them hiding behind the counter with the nurse even though "Lois knew the counter wouldn’t be much protection" (especially your description of Jonathan). You did a good job of capturing Lois' determination to get the story afterwards as well--following the trail of blood --Ick but so very Lois.
Finally--I love Clark's hospital scene--his confusion upon waking up--pain from the surgery--His parents and Lois. Just wonderfully put together.
Poor Clark is just to ill to figure things out yet.
And then Jonathan drops that bomb on him--even if he is trying to help (ever the voice of reason) Clark must really feel like he's been hit by a truck.
Looking forward to the next installment!!
Soon Please!!!
George Nelson. . .help me remember--that's Baby Face righ??
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Monroe shrugged. “Let’s get Mister Nelson here some clothes before we take him down to headquarters,” she instructed.
“Why are you taking me down to headquarters?”
“Routine questioning,” Sheehan said, walking in. “Oh, and welcome to 1994, Mister Gillis. And in case you didn’t know, there’s still no statute of limitations on murder.”
“Why are you taking me down to headquarters?”
“Routine questioning,” Sheehan said, walking in. “Oh, and welcome to 1994, Mister Gillis. And in case you didn’t know, there’s still no statute of limitations on murder.”
I like the statute of limitations comment--I always thought that the clones were having it a bit to easy--leagally.Quote
“Probably getting the money from the same place Capone did for his bribes,” Leocadio pointed out. “There wasn’t a hundred grand in all the bank jobs they pulled all together. If Luthor wasn’t dead, I’d be seriously looking at that bastard.”
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“Hey, he’s the first time one of my murder cases turned into ‘assault with a deadly weapon’ instead of the other way around,”
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“The DA’s office has ordered police protection for both you and Mister Kent,” Murphy explained.
“I can’t do my job with a body guard hanging around,” Lois told him.
“I can’t do my job with a body guard hanging around,” Lois told him.
The whole attempted asassination scene was very well writen--if to long to quote here. I love the three of them hiding behind the counter with the nurse even though "Lois knew the counter wouldn’t be much protection" (especially your description of Jonathan). You did a good job of capturing Lois' determination to get the story afterwards as well--following the trail of blood --Ick but so very Lois.
Finally--I love Clark's hospital scene--his confusion upon waking up--pain from the surgery--His parents and Lois. Just wonderfully put together.
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He saw the concerned look Lois gave his mother.
“Bryant found more kryptonite in his chest,” Martha explained simply. Lois nodded and Clark had a sense than something had passed between the two women. Something he didn’t understand.
“Bryant found more kryptonite in his chest,” Martha explained simply. Lois nodded and Clark had a sense than something had passed between the two women. Something he didn’t understand.
And then Jonathan drops that bomb on him--even if he is trying to help (ever the voice of reason) Clark must really feel like he's been hit by a truck.
Looking forward to the next installment!!
Soon Please!!!
Re: FDK-Death in the City 9 - 03/24/07 04:56 PM
Thank you, thank you 
Yup, Baby Face Nelson - His real name was Lester Gillis, but he used George Nelson. He was a psychotic killer who worked for Dillinger. There is some belief that he never actually worked for Capone, but he would have been known by him.
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I'm really enjoying this fic!! Thanks for the update [Thumbsup]
George Nelson. . .help me remember--that's Baby Face righ??
quote: Monroe shrugged. “Let’s get Mister Nelson here some clothes before we take him down to headquarters,” she instructed.
“Why are you taking me down to headquarters?”
“Routine questioning,” Sheehan said, walking in. “Oh, and welcome to 1994, Mister Gillis. And in case you didn’t know, there’s still no statute of limitations on murder.”
[Big Grin] I like the statute of limitations comment--I always thought that the clones were having it a bit to easy--leagally.
George Nelson. . .help me remember--that's Baby Face righ??
quote: Monroe shrugged. “Let’s get Mister Nelson here some clothes before we take him down to headquarters,” she instructed.
“Why are you taking me down to headquarters?”
“Routine questioning,” Sheehan said, walking in. “Oh, and welcome to 1994, Mister Gillis. And in case you didn’t know, there’s still no statute of limitations on murder.”
[Big Grin] I like the statute of limitations comment--I always thought that the clones were having it a bit to easy--leagally.
Re: FDK-Death in the City 9 - 05/04/07 11:11 AM
cmon huury up with the next one!! 
Re: FDK-Death in the City 9 - 05/04/07 12:25 PM
I'll be back working on Death In the City sometime next week. Between RL and and challenge on another board that took way longer than I'd planned...