Awww, dance of seven veils off-screen!

This is a great part! Now that Lois is more herself, I bet things are going to get really interesting!

I can't wait to hear Clark explain this one!

And it was just perfect that we know Lois is really back when she gives Wally what he has coming! In defense of Clark, no less!

Hi,

Great part.

Oh, now this is getting very very good <g> Can't wait to see the conversation over breakfast!

Nan, good instalment, but definitely a tease.

By using the Wally interlude (which was quite funny by the way, and probably only helped Clark's case with Lois) you were able to delay the 'morning after' conversation until next time. I'd call that a bit of a tease.

I think the next instalment could get very interesting if you don't stay too close to the actual episode.

Tank (who really hopes that Clark isn't stupid enough to use that "I guess I must not be attracted to you, Lois" line)

Yeah, I'm definitely wondering how that's going to pan out, too. Meanwhile...LOL. The Wally part...great stuff. Good installment, Nan. Looking forward to more!

Jen

Great post! All my favorite parts have already been said... Post next part soon please!!!

Tank hopes:
That is the $64,000 question, isn't it? Is Nan going to have Clark be his usual lunkheaded self? Clark in this story has already had to deal with more than Clark did during the episode: all the women - and men - chasing after him at the Planet (well of course, who could blame them?), and Lois here has been more persistent and therefore irresistible. I think Clark's nerves are more frazzled than ever, and who knows what he's going to say... :rolleyes:

Nan, this was a great installment. Like everyone else, I loved the Wally bit. I'm really looking forward to their breakfast conversation: I hope that Clark doesn't stick his foot in his mouth too badly...

KathyM

Nan

WOW! This is great.

I can't wait to read the next part. Please post it ASAP.

Tricia

Disappointed? As if! This was a wonderful segment, Nan. You added so much more to what we saw on the show and in such a funny and entertaining way. And waffy, too.

More please, soon as you like!

LabRat

Nan its sooo good!

I am really hoping for a Waffy ending to this whole mess and maybe even a revelation? Well whatever the ending be I am sure it will make us all happy!

~L.L Wanna Be

Aww Nan Clark is just so sweet. I am looking forward to more. Great job. Laura

Yay Nan!

Great segment, I can't wait for the next part. Post quick! And I agree with the others: Leave out the "I guess I'm not attracted to you, Lois" bit. Let Clark tell the *real* truth!

Caroline

Nan,
great part -
ditto others
more soon please
merry

Nan, great part!

I, too, am somewhat disappointed to find out that the whole dance of the seven veils happens "offscreen." Oh well, I guess you didn't want to waste space echoing what happened in the real episode. I'll forgive you if we get some smoochies between them soon.

Cool! Give the boy some hope!

This whole scene, including Lois' rescue, was hilarious!

I'm quite glad that we finally had some co-workers fall for Lois. I wondered how she'd handle it.

Let's see if she's more willing to admit later that she's attracted to Clark after she finds out the perfume doesn't create emotion.

Look forward to Part 5. Is this going to be a long story?

Hi Nan,

once more a wonderful installment! I devoured it in no time at all and found myself only disappointed at the fact that I want chapter 5 'now'!

lol

No, honestly, I loved it once more, everything... Wally, the hangover,...everything!

Sira -

I loved this part.

I hope, along with the rest that Clark does not suffer from Athlete's Tongue!

James