I'm waiting for comments PLEASE? Somebody?

Perry certainly didn't become editor cuz he knew how to yodel.

Great part.

Yay, a sequel! That's a good cover story they've got going there. Even if Perry sees through it probably no one else will. Clark is going to have his hands full with a baby, though. And who's gonna watch her while Daddy's out saving the world? Lois had better have something in mind. But I'll bet she does.

Post more, I'm reading

PJ

I'm reading, too. Please don't worry about not getting rapid-fire feedback. I've learned that a dearth of feedback is sometimes an indication that people just haven't found your post yet, and multi-chapter stories usually don't get the flurries of comments that short vignettes do. It's just the nature of the beast.

I like the way Perry softly interrogated Clark and decided that he's gotten better at lying. If Perry can't spot the inconsistencies right away, it's doubtful any casual conversation would tip anyone off.

And, like Pam, I look forward to seeing just how "interesting" Clark's life will be now. His hearing wil pick up, "211 in progress, Metro Bank and Trust." (211 is an armed robbery.) But Superman can't respond because Clark is in the middle of cleaning up an especially dirty diaper!

Lois needs to let him do most of that, too. It will show him just how much he missed out on with his own child, who he didn't know he had.

Keep it up. I really liked "Plane Storm," and if this one is as good as its predecessor, we're in for a real treat.

Oh, Pam, I read the story quoted in your sig. Darkly hilarious! Wish I'd written it.

Hi,

Great start!