Whoa! Holy surprise-ness.
Wasn't expecting such a quick wrap-up, here. But I do smell a sequel, yes? That is good...
I like the fading memory thing. Otherwise, there is absolutely no way that you could wrap this up as quickly as you did--those kind of memories last a lifetime.
I was a little suspicious about this paragraph, though
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...crest of his pelvic bone– he didn’t remember being hurt there. And the spot on his arm where they’d had to lay open the skin and muscles to set one of the bones itched badly under wrappings.
Do I sense something alluding to another certain torture story being written right now? That sounds like blood samples and a bone marrow sample (taken from the correct place, this time) unless I am just going mad!
Great job on this story! It was intense, well written, and gripping. Thanks for taking the challenge and helping inspire me to start my own fanfiction piece. You're the greatest!
SmirkyRaven