<snicker>

This is great, Nan -- more logical than the episode, but that just makes it hysterical in a different way. And I have to tell you, I love the recurring reference to the copy machine and Clark's determination to *not* go in there.

Can't wait to see more!

PJ

he didn't go to the lobby.

but finding her at his place wearing his shirt

:rotfl:

Yes...poor Clark, indeed. I almost feel mean chortling at his discomfort. But only slightly. <g>

Wonderful stuff, Nan! Absolutely hilarious. The scene in his apartment I can only describe as smouldering (/me fans herself), as well as being very funny.

Superb. I love the way you've weaving in the events of the episodes while twisting them too. And Hamm was the perfect finishing touch.

More please!

LabRat

Yeah, what they said.

Great part!!

Poor Clark! Can't go anywhere without being mauled

Nan, I'm loving this story. It's hilarious and I'm glad I have my own office since I keep laughing out loud as I read.

Everyone has pointed out my favorite parts too, but the ending of this part was priceless.

More, please!!

Vicki

Oh poor Clark -- Lois half-naked in his bed and he has no idea what to do. And he's still getting attacked by everyone at work -- even Rahilia! I am really enjoying this story hurry uo with part 3 .

- Alicia

Hi,

Great part.

I'm really enjoying this romp through PML. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this; it's so much fun.

gerry

Do we really need any more proof that Clark is, indeed, a lunkhead.

He has Lois lying in his bed with only a shirt on. So, of course, he does the only logical thing... he leaves!

I agree, that if he 'took advantage' of Lois, it wouldn't be Clark (and Lois would kill him). But that doesn't mean he can't enjoy the view for a time.

Tank (who is still waiting for this to happen to him... and waiting... and waiting...)

Nan you are amazing!

The story plot keeps twisting and turning and I don't know how it will end and it seems know one else does either. More soon!

~L.L Wanna Be

Poor Clark LOL! Even the guys are hitting on him. Well I hope he at least lets Lois get a smooch in. Laura

I loved the story, but you kept teasing us. Everytime we thought we'd get to see Lois throwing herself at Clark, he'd find some excuse to get away or Superman would be needed somewhere. Argh!

While it's funny to watch others throw themselves at Clark, I would have preferred to see more of Lois doing that. As Tank said, he had a half-naked Lois in his bed and he didn't bother to stick around to at least appreciate the scenery.

Love this story so far! I think everyone else has already pointed out all my favorite parts, so I'll just say again this is great!

LOL, Nan!!

I like the way everyone wants Clark... even Hamm???/me rotflolling.

More soon, please!!

AnnaBtG.

I am dying...

More please.

I still think we need some more equal time. We need to see more, or rather some, men throw themselves at Lois. Maybe you could pre-spray Lex (before coming to the DP) and see him throwing himself at her while she's preoccupied with Clark. Just that would be worth the price of admission.

Nan

This is great.

I love the changes you have made to the episode. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Tricia

Thanks, everyone, for the nice comments.

I wonder if anyone realizes how hard it is to write comedy? It's a lot more difficult than drama or action, believe me, which is why this is taking me longer than usual to write. I'm thinking about the suggestion, RL, I promise. It's a good one. Actually, I've been considering how to include a couple of guys making passes at Lois, who is totally fixated on Clark, and I believe I've come up with what I want to do. I'll have to see how it turns out.

I'll be going to LAFF Friday and Saturday, so I won't have much time to write, but I promise to get back to it as quickly as possible afterwards.

Again, thanks, everyone.

Nan

Great part Nan
ditto others
more soon please
merry

Argggh! I'm sooo late, but I just had to throw in my two cents!
I love this story! The second part was wonderfully written; full of comedy and suspense at the same time. I just can't wait to find out what happens next!
However long the next chapter takes, I'll be waiting eagerly!

More soon, please!

Sira

This is so great.