When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 01:03 PM
You know what goes here.
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Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 01:26 PM
Great section, Elle, and even better for being long!
This line made me
This line made me
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 02:08 PM
Yes, Elle, you're not only evil, you've set a new gold standard of evilness with this (EvilElena definitely has a challenge on her hands 
). Luthor was hilariously creepy - I think it's just the fact that he's just *so* out of character that makes him icky, rather than anything he says or does. And then to top that off with Scardino! Boy, you're having fun with this, aren't you?
Yvonne
). Luthor was hilariously creepy - I think it's just the fact that he's just *so* out of character that makes him icky, rather than anything he says or does. And then to top that off with Scardino! Boy, you're having fun with this, aren't you?Yvonne
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 06:24 PM
Well Cat is Perry, Lex is a Saint, Perry is Mayor, Lois is Wanda and Clark is out of the closet. Very interesting Alt fic. I can't wait for Lois and Clark to meet. Now why is Scardino there and who is May? Laura
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 08:45 PM
Luthor, a missionary? :rolleyes: Clark feeling uneasy around him, 
Will he do something or did he do something to deserve this 
It was nice to see Alice in the story
post more soon 
Will he do something or did he do something to deserve this It was nice to see Alice in the story
post more soon
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/27/03 11:59 PM
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Does this make me evil yet??
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Yeah May, I love you too."
The man closed the flip phone and looked at Clark. "I love my wife, but the woman doesn't always check in with reality. Daniel Scardino."
The man closed the flip phone and looked at Clark. "I love my wife, but the woman doesn't always check in with reality. Daniel Scardino."
It was time that somobody put those two together. Jose
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 01:15 AM
Oooooooooooh, Elle. Wonderful segment! Just loved it. This gets more intriguing and more enjoyable by the minute.
Previous posters have pretty much said everything else that caught my eye. Like Wendy I
at the Chippendale line. I think Yvonne hit the nail on the head with Luthor. He's so eerily creepy he had my skin crawling along with Clark's as I read. Bleah! <g>
I loved the substitution of Alice and Perry for Martha and Jonathan - with the telephone pickup and all. Very clever!
And LOL'd again at the Rocky Road/Chocolate allusion.
And....Dan Scardino!! ROTFL! And I never even registered who May was till I got to this folder.
Inspired! Keep it coming!
LabRat
Previous posters have pretty much said everything else that caught my eye. Like Wendy I
at the Chippendale line. I think Yvonne hit the nail on the head with Luthor. He's so eerily creepy he had my skin crawling along with Clark's as I read. Bleah! <g> I loved the substitution of Alice and Perry for Martha and Jonathan - with the telephone pickup and all. Very clever!
And LOL'd again at the Rocky Road/Chocolate allusion.
And....Dan Scardino!! ROTFL! And I never even registered who May was till I got to this folder.
Inspired! Keep it coming!
LabRat
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 02:24 AM
Evil, Elle? Nooo... Let's see, you put together Wanda Detroit, Lex Luthor and Daniel Scardino, together with a lonely CK, all in the same story...
Now, why ever would anyone think you're evil???
I hope you're planning on solving this mess, and the sooner the better. Poor Clark really needs his Lois...
Anywa, I'm loving every word of this story!
Keep it coming,
Cris
Now, why ever would anyone think you're evil???
I hope you're planning on solving this mess, and the sooner the better. Poor Clark really needs his Lois...
Anywa, I'm loving every word of this story!
Keep it coming,
Cris
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 05:08 AM
Elle
This is great.
What a twist!
Luthor as a missionary, yikes!
Scardino, Wanda!
I'm enjoying this immensely and can't wait to see what happens next.
Tricia
This is great.
What a twist!
Luthor as a missionary, yikes!
Scardino, Wanda!
I'm enjoying this immensely and can't wait to see what happens next.
Tricia
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 07:44 AM
Elle,
good intriguing story
ditto others- interesting character situations
more soon please
merry
good intriguing story
ditto others- interesting character situations
more soon please
merry
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 11:28 AM
Elle, good instalment.
Let's see... Lex is a saintly god-fearing missionary. Lana has been remodeled into an insiteful caring friend. Cat is a highly competant editor. Perry and Alice are still happily married. And Daniel Scardino is a befuddled and henpecked husband to a 'round the bend' Mayson. This is not evil.
What is evil *IS* that we haven't seen Lois yet!
Tank the Retired (who thinks that there is enough fodder for several conspiracy theorys laid out in this fic so far)
Let's see... Lex is a saintly god-fearing missionary. Lana has been remodeled into an insiteful caring friend. Cat is a highly competant editor. Perry and Alice are still happily married. And Daniel Scardino is a befuddled and henpecked husband to a 'round the bend' Mayson. This is not evil.
What is evil *IS* that we haven't seen Lois yet!
Tank the Retired (who thinks that there is enough fodder for several conspiracy theorys laid out in this fic so far)
Re: When the West Wind Moves, Part 7 - Feedback - 04/28/03 06:47 PM
This story is great! I finally caught up with all 7 parts today and I'm so glad I did! Wow Lex as a mercinary, Scardino as chocolate... and Wanda Detriot... I love it 
Alicia
Wow Lex as a mercinary, Scardino as chocolate... and Wanda Detriot... I love it Alicia