Not too often I get to start a folder.

Some steamy parts in this section, ML, even after your g-ficing it down (or should that be up?)

But that's what interested me - (that sounds bad, like I'm just here for the L & C "interludes" )

Seriously, though, the essence of the scene is still the same - you've still conveyed the passion and depth of emotion that these two lovers intuitively share. And that's the important stuff.

Have to say, this story is one of my favourites of all the ones you've given us.

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Thanks, Carol. I always find it challenging when I have to try to pg a story that I originally wrote in nfic - especially when those nfic scenes contain information important to the story. I'm glad you think that I didn't lose the essence of the scene. I just hope I pg'd it enough.

Wow! Thanks, Carol.

ML

Just catching up on this story.

WOW! This is awesome!

*hopeful* More, please?

I *love* this story. And I wish I was more eloquent. But seriously, this one is awesome. I can hardly wait to read the rest of it.

thanks, guys. Glad you're enjoying it. And now... On to part ten.

ML