Oh, that was absolutely priceless. I literally burst out laughing at the end. It was just what I needed, too. Thanks so much, FinLi.
Originally posted by Incognito:
Oh, that was absolutely priceless. I literally burst out laughing at the end. It was just what I needed, too. Thanks so much, FinLi. I'm glad you liked it.
I came up with it when I was on a walk. I was laughing so hard to myself, people probably thought I was crazy
Glad I could brighten your day.
FinLi
FinLi, I guessed that was what he'd forgotten, but I thought he'd just pull his shirt apart. When he spun instead, I LOLed. What a revelation!
LOL I had no idea where you were going with this and your ending was way better than anything I guessed. Priceless!!
Natascha (still chuckling)
::chuckles happily and sighs::
oh, that was good!
Oh, seeing is beliving. Good show.
God, I thought he forgot his glasses. This was so much better!
Hilarious!!!!!!!! Short as it is, it was one fun reading!
I read this last night before bed and I gotta tell you I went to sleep with a silly grin on my face just going over the ending in my head. LMAO!!!
CJ
*giggles* Poor, poor Clark! Must...not...laugh...!
Well, at least I have a nice image to giggle over when I go to sleep tonight. :p
Great job!
Hi,
Yes, I guessed but it still made me laugh.
Very cute! And I'm sure Clark was too!
Yours Jenni
Poor, poor Clark! His big moment, telling Lois about The Secret, and it's ruined! He'll never be able to face her again, either as the reporter or the hero, without knowing that she's thinking of him standing there in his birthday suit.
And Lois? How can she be mad at him when she's rolling around on the floor of the vault, laughing her head off? I hope he gets dressed and gets her out quickly, before she uses up all the oxygen in the room.
Oh, yeah, it was downright hysterical. I bit my lip trying not to laugh too loudly.
Hi everyone,
My goodness, what wonderful feedback.
I'm so happy that you all enjoyed my story, and that I could write something that made you laugh.
Thanks again
FinLi
Hehe, lots of fun!
At some point I thought he might have forgotten his suit, but I really wasn't prepared for that one.
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
What a great surprise for Lois!
DJ bows before the queen of comedy.
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<strong> DJ bows before the queen of comedy.
FinLi
Wow I just read this story. Amazing! haha
~Lois Lane Wanna Be
OMG That was too funny
Just when Clark has to tell her the truth he does something like this
: I'm not sure but I don't think Lois minded too much
Kara
As we have a tradition/policy here of keeping stories and comments separate, KaraGail, I've moved your comment here into the comments folder and deleted it from the bottom of the story thread.
Just in case you wondered where it had vanished to.
LabRat