FDK : "A Cut Above The Rest" 1/2 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Congrats on your first story(well, first half anyway.) party

It was great! The banter between Lois and Clark is just like the show.

I could really "see" the whole scene in the Daily Planet. You describe it really well.

I especially loved this part.

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"Morning, Clark."

"Morning, Lois," he replied bending over her and handing her a cup of coffee. He gave her a light lingering kiss on the cheek that sent playful little feelings all through her. "It had cooled off a little bit since you hadn't gotten here yet, but I *warmed it up* for you," he said emphasizing what he had done by tipping his glasses down on his nose slightly.

It's sooo sweet

I can't wait to read more.

FinLi

Thanks FinLi.

After watching the Kerths and reading everyone else's stories, I just had to try writing a fanfic. It looked like so much fun. I'm glad someone liked it.

I've finished my editing and revisions and the second half is posted now.

I see you got your nerve together to post the story. <g>

It's a good story, and your agitated Lois is certainly in fine form. I think you did a good job with it.

Nan

Great job! I thought this was a totally believable explanation for why Lois got the cut! Loved it!
Marcy

Hi Nan! Oh that makes me mad. I was so concerned with how to post my story that I forgot to thank my two beta readers for their hard work and helping me with my story.

That's it. I'm going back to edit my post so I can put that in there.

Many many thanks to Nan and Suz for their hard work in reading my story, providing their insights, and helping me. Sorry I didn't put that in my original post. You guys were great!

And thank you to Marcy! I'm glad you liked it. That makes it all worth writing, if it is enjoyed.