Looks like I get to start the feedback for this story.
I read your post in the Fanfic Challenge, and this seems like a very interesting premise. There are all sorts of exposition still needed, but it was pretty neat the way your story jumped right into the action.
Great start. I am eager to read more.
-Em
Hmmm...interesting start. Cannot wait to see where this goes.
Your introduction to the story really caught my curiousity and I read your first 2 parts.
Very interesting premise, please continue.
Definitely very interesting, Framework. I have to wonder what Clark did to make Lois so bitter. Clark being Clark, there is no way he could have forced her or tricked her into having sex with him. So, indeed, what did he do?
Well, one thing he apparently didn't do was tell her that he was Superman. He should have, you know. It's hardly fair putting a woman at risk of becoming pregnant without letting her know that if it happens, she'll be carrying Superman's child. As far as I can see from your story, Lois doesn't know that her son is "special". Why didn't Clark tell her? If he got too carried away "before", he should definitely have told her afterwards.
Also, it's sad to think that in this story, Superman - Clark - will indeed be dead. So will this be a story about Lois and her son, with his emerging powers?
Anyway, Framework. It's a fascinating premise, and I'm really curious about where you will be taking it.
Ann
Gotten me curious with the premise, Framework. It's going to be interesting to see how things unfold in your coming posts.
I'm a little late.Great premise! I'm off the read the next parts.
Jackie
