FDK: The Story I've Never Seen - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Posted By: Shallowford FDK: The Story I've Never Seen - 03/20/24 04:47 PM

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Bravo! Short, sweet and to the point!

That was awesome! Taking a phrase literally for a reveal.

Ahahahaha I love it!!

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...because really, what else should he have expected?

They do seem to have inevitably bad luck, don't they?

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There was a cracking sound and the sidewalk collapsed beneath him into the storm drain below.

I can literally see this happening!!

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Then she looked at Clark--hanging over nothing.

BUSTED!

This was such a fun idea! I'm so glad you took the time to hear that line literally and write this.

Such a fun twist on the proposal scene. Great fun.

Hi Shallowford!

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This is the one Lois & Clark story that I know has to be out there but I’ve never seen it.

/makes intrigued face/

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Things were going well. Finally. Despite painful beginnings, his relationship with Lois had progressed to THAT point.

/hums “bow chica wow wow” or however it is spelled/

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They were both riding high after their front-page story of malfeasance and embezzlement in the Metropolis Water and Sewer department.

Who would embezzle sewage?

LEO NUNK:

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After a wonderful dinner out, Clark directed their walk to Centennial Park.

Clark! Not for the first time!

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“If the earth opened up at my feet, I wouldn’t move till I’d finished saying this,” he said, taking her hand with both of his.

There was a cracking sound and the sidewalk collapsed beneath him into the storm drain below.

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Lois looked down into the ten foot deep hole. Then she looked at Clark—hanging over nothing.

The earth had opened at his feet. He hadn’t moved.

Oops?

This was a really unexpected punchline!

Michael

Haha, this was too funny!