FDK: Challenger Deep (6/6) - 01/26/24 02:25 AM
The long overdue conclusion to Lois and Clark's adventure with Lori the mermaid!
Re: FDK: Challenger Deep (6/6) - 01/30/24 05:31 PM
SO happy to see the conclusion to this one!
It's so sweet to see him really leaning on her. I always love when we see that Superman really needs others.
Such an interesting set-up! It really makes me respect deep water a lot more, too, lol.
I love that this is the gold standard for Superman's abilities - love using the debut here!
I love the way this bumps up the tension!
Oh, very sad that she'll be cut off from her home if she goes back up!
Trust Lois to find him second after his arrival back! Especially after that dinner/car alarm stunt he pulled!
Ope... Lying to Lois - he's really taking his life in his hands here!
This is such a bittersweet ending!
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He hoped to channel some of her steely nerves when it was time to face the Council.
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Down here, he was practically helpless. He was hundreds of feet underwater, surrounded by people he couldn’t understand and in a cave he couldn’t navigate
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He chuckled. “Uh… I once lifted a space shuttle into orbit, if that answers your questions.”
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The slight tightness that he’d felt in his chest earlier had begun to feel like a low, but consistent burn. He was running out of time down here.
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“I’ll see you up there, Clark.”
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He’d only taken a few steps out of the alley, before Lois slammed into him, rooting him in place with a tight hug.
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“You’re the worst,” she grumbled, into his jacket.
“I love you, too, Lois.”
“I love you, too, Lois.”
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“Just like that, huh?” she replied, still understandably skeptical.
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He chose not to look too closely. If she wanted to find him, she knew how.
Re: FDK: Challenger Deep (6/6) - 01/30/24 05:50 PM
Thanks for finally posting that last chapter. Great to see this through to a victorious end. Thanks for sharing.
Re: FDK: Challenger Deep (6/6) - 02/01/24 05:31 PM
Definitely a different kind of story for Lois and Clark. Lori was brave, yet sad. Perhaps one day you can re-visit this world and let us know what happened to her?
Re: FDK: Challenger Deep (6/6) - 03/02/24 05:37 AM
Aww, this was kind of sad. Excellent visuals though; I could see everything and everyone!