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I totally meant to post this yesterday... Chapter 6!

Eeee!!! Snuggle time for our favorite couple! And dancing precariously close to a revelation... oh my!

Tell us what you thought! love

Sara and Socomama laugh
Wow, that was intense! Lois has opened up to her whole self.
Oooo… are we getting a certain revelation soon?

Love the way Clark takes care of her and how Lois is opening up to Clark. You also make the interesting point of Clark again emphasising that he asked Lois out and not Mayson.

Extremely presumptuous of Mayson to assume Clark’s interest in her was anything beyond friendship even if that given most of their interactions were in a professional capacity. Also liked that you made the point that he never actually agreed to go spend the weekend in the mountains with her (seriously who does that? You barely know the guy).
AHHHHHH!!! shock
I was expecting him to tell her right there! She had given him the perfect opportunity--though I understand his hesitancy...

And now I can't wait for him to take her to the Chinese place! smile1

Eager for next part love
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The almost-date. The almost-kisses. The almost-dazzling. The violent barfing.

The violent barfing line cracked me up.

Nice touch with the promise of a date to Clark's great Chinese food location. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ahhh so glad you're all enjoying so much! We're really delighted at everyone's reactions so far!! Will we get a revelation??? huh peep

Thank you all for the feedback!! notworthy

Sara and Socomama smile
Oh, this was perfect. Śo he's going to tell her? Can't wait!
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