A work long i the making. Please let me know what you think.

Oh boy, I've been waiting for you to start posting this!

Interesting, tense start!!

All of Lois's emotions are so intense! I was holding my breath right along with her every time the elevator dinged!

Glad you showed Superman was out and about, although I worry what's going on with him as well...

Looking forward to the next chapter!!

-Bek

That's what I was aiming for. Glad you liked it so far. I'm curious what you'll think about the rest.

Great to see such a long story from you. I'm so used to the Magikal verse (which gets me to work on a Friday morning and I love BTW and should review!), so seeing 32 chapters promised is very exciting. Looking forward to #2.

Let me encourage you to take this one in. It will leave you all but breathless as you await the next chapter.

Thanks for the double feedback. I hope you will enjoy this tale, too. I'm intending to post the next part some time tomorrow, probably in evening.



Thanks for advertising for this fic. And thank you once again for agreeing to beta.

Poor Lois. It looks like her frayed nerves are getting the better of her. I could feel her trepidation and uneasiness after a scary nightmare.

Has Clark been at the fire all night? Or is there something else going on? I hope it doesn't ruin their date.

Looking forwward to the next chapter.

Andreia